From 5c3c5f8ea5453ba7f52e8b10a21b5137a45dd6dd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Leni Aniva <v@leni.sh>
Date: Sat, 28 Oct 2023 21:40:51 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] "I Vow to Thee, My Country" phrasing

---
 anthems/i-vow-to-thee-my-country.ly | 48 ++++++++++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 24 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-)

diff --git a/anthems/i-vow-to-thee-my-country.ly b/anthems/i-vow-to-thee-my-country.ly
index 00d2451..c5646e7 100644
--- a/anthems/i-vow-to-thee-my-country.ly
+++ b/anthems/i-vow-to-thee-my-country.ly
@@ -14,48 +14,48 @@ violin = \relative { \repeat volta 2 {
 	\key c \major
 
 	r2    e'8( g) | a4. c8  b8. g16 |
-	c8(d  c4)  b  | a8( b)  a4  g   |
+	c8(d  c4)  b  | a8( b)  a4(  g)  |
 	e2    e8(  g) | a4. c8  b8. g16 |
 	c8(d) e4   e  | e8( d)  c4  d   |
-	c2    g8(  e) | d4. d8  c   e   |
-	d4(g) g8(  e) | d4. d8  e   g   |
+	c2    g8(  e) | d4. d8( c   e)  |
+	d4(g) g8(  e) | d4. d8( e   g)  |
 	a2    a8(  b) | c8. c16 b4  a   |
-	g4    c4   e, | d8  c   d4  e   |
-	g2    e8(  g) | a4. c8  b8.(g16)|
-	c8(d  c4)  b  | a8  b   a4  g   |
-	e2    e8   g  | a4. c8  b8. g16 |
-	c8 d  e4   e  | e8  d   c4  d   |
+	g4    c4   e, | d8( c)  d4  e   |
+	g2    e8(  g) | a4.(c8) b8.(g16)|
+	c8(d  c4)  b  | a8( b)  a4( g)  |
+	e2    e8(  g) | a4.(c8) b8. g16 |
+	c8(d) e4   e  | e8  d   c4  d   |
 	c2    r4     | r2      r4      |
 }}
 
 first = \lyricmode {
 	I vow to thee my
-	country all earthly things a --
+	country all earthly "things a" --
 	bove, En -- tire and whole and
 	per -- fect, the service of my
-	love. The love that asks no
-	questions, the love that stands the
+	love. The love "that asks no"
+	questions, the love "that stands the"
 	test. That lays up -- on the
-	al -- tar the dear -- est and the
-	best. The love that never
-	falters, the love that pays the
-	price. Th -- e love that makes un --
-	da -- un -- ted the fin -- al sa -- cri --
+	al -- tar the dearest and the
+	best. The "love that" never
+	falters, the "love that" "pays the"
+	price. The "love that" makes un --
+	daun -- ted the fin -- al sa -- cri --
 	fice.
 }
 second = \lyricmode {
 	And there -- 's ano -- ther
-	country I've heard-of long a --
+	country I've "heard of" "long a" --
 	go. Most dear to them that
 	love her, most great-to them that
-	know. We may not count her
-	armies, we may not see her
+	know. We may "not count her"
+	armies, we may "not see her"
 	king. Her for -- tress is a
-	faithful heart her pride is su -- ffer --
-	ing. And soul by soul
-	silently, her shi -- ning bounds in --
-	crease. And her ways are ways of
-	gen -- tle -- ness, and all her paths are
+	faithful heart her "pride is" su -- ffer --
+	ing. And "soul by" soul
+	silently, her shining "bounds in" --
+	crease. "And her" "ways are" ways of
+	gentle -- ness, and all her paths are
 	peace.
 }