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The battle symbology is derived from NATO Joint Military Symbols and is
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## Format
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The symbology used in battle diagrams is given in `references.tex`. To cite a
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passage, use the format `(VOL CH LINE)`, e.g. `(I.1.123)` refers to line `123`
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of volume I chapter 1 (A Wish). The line number is the unfolded line number
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which can be extracted in Emacs via `nov.el` and
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``` emacs-lisp
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(setq nov-text-width t)
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(add-hook 'nov-mode-hook 'visual-line-mode)
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```
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\usepackage{magica}
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\ProvidesPackage{magica}[2023/07/06 Magica]
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\ProvidesPackage{magica}[2023/07/06 Magica]
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\usepackage[dvipsnames]{xcolor}
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\node [fill=MilSymb@fill, \MilSymb@line] {\bigstar};
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star, star points=5, star point height=6px, draw=black, scale=0.6, rotate=180] {};
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#+title: To The Stars
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Up to [v1/p37]
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* History
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** Volume I
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Allocs were cut (/Recommendation by the Production and Allocation Machine
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(PAL)/) [v1/p4].
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At some point in the past the "current war" started, which caused extra allocs
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from voluntary work to increase and the basic allocs to decrease. [v1/p16].
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Due to a special conscription act enacted 20 years ago, all new magic girls owe
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the military 30 years of service [v1/p20]. The minimum age of combat was dropped to 13.
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Magic girls enter the military not as privates but 2nd lieutenants.
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A defect in the Cult of Hope's computers caused random drops with grief cubes
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for squads on the front line [v1/p33]. The occurrence seems random. This was
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counterintuitive since computers are not supposed to make such mistakes. Secret
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examination squads sent by Kyouko could not spot problems [v1/p33]. Similar
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defects caused girls to be sent behind the lines or home and never came back.
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When Kyouko was visiting Wolf 359, a platoon of infantry dragged Saya-chan's
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body and soul gem back to safety, but lost her. They broke down in front of
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Kyouko demanding that she finds the missing Saya-chan.
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* Characters
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*** Shizuki Ryouko 静樹 良子
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Main protagonist
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Mentor: Sakura Kyouko
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- Diminutive stature [v1/p5] but does not want to be perceived as a child.
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- Begins as 14 years old
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- Thinks "nothing is worth rushing for" [v1/p6]
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- Lives on the 42nd story [v1/p6], in Mitakihara city [v1/p6]
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- Has a automatic telescope from grandmother which receives instructions from
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cortical implants. [v1/p7]
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- Could not find a hobby [v1/p8]
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- Wants to be a space traveler [v1/p15]
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- Wants to be a magic girls despite knowing the risks since the life has
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contrast with the "sterile, prosaic life" [v1/p22]. It was granted after an
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encounter with demons and miasmae [v2/p57].
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- Her weapon as a magical girl is a arbalest (crossbow) and can teleport [v2/p67,68]
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- Can teleport up to 200km, but cannot telekinesis or teleport objects without
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teleporting self [v1/p70]. 200km is much greater than the standing record of 63km.
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*** Simona
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Friend of Ryouko and foreign exchange student [v1/p13]
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- Wants to be a violinist [v1/p15]
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- Exchange student but not very interested in learning languages. She embarked
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on an exchange to get away from family [v1/p40]
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- Describes Earth as same people everywhere [v1/p41]
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- May have romantic feelings towards Ryouko [v2/p77]
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*** Chiaki 智晶
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Friend of Ryouko [p1/v14]
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- Long-haired [p1/v14]
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*** Ruiko 瑠衣子
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Friend of Ryouko [v1/p14]
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- Pig-tailed
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- Wanted to learn nanoengineering or theoretical physics (dropped) [v1/p14]
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*** Ryouko's father
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- Over 100 years old but looks around 30 [v1/p8]
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*** Ryouko's (paternal) grandfather
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- Join the military on Monday next week (rel. [v1/p12])
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*** Ryouko's (paternal) grandmother
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- Joined the military for 12 years [v1/p10]
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- Stopped writing to her family but she is not dead. [v1/p10]
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- Want to see something other than Earth by her own accounts [v1/p41]
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*** Tomoe Mami 巴 麻美
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- Looked to be 19-20yo despite being hundreds of years old. [v1/p18]
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- Can converse while holding a motionless face
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- Body is enhanced
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- Field Marshall [v1/p35]
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*** Sakura Kyouko 桜 香子
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- Looks to be 14 and lives in the Catholic-style church in Mitakihara [v1/p25]
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- Calls Mami "Marshal" [v1/p26]
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- Calls MSY the "Union" [v1/p30]
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*** Akemi Homura 暁美 ほむら
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- "Left" with no more news [v1/p27]
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- Believs in "Goddess of Hope" [v1/p28]
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- 20 years ago she leveraged the Goddess of Hope and her charisma to start a
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religion which gained members.
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- Had presentations and statistics when she was spearheading MSY
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- Vanished after saving Epsilon Eridani [v1/p30]
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*** Yuma
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- Says Akemi Homura has disappeared due to the exhaustion of her soul gem [v1/p43]
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* In-Book Items
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*** /Daughters of the Contract: A Documentary/
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** Culture
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- Governance stress having each generation of children experience a little of
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||||||
human conditions [v1/p5]
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|
||||||
- Governance placed restrictions on direct mental communication and VR [v1/p6]
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|
||||||
- Nothing worth rushing for [v1/p6]
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|
||||||
- Story of human history was all about escape in the past and has reached the
|
|
||||||
end for perfect society [v1/p6]
|
|
||||||
- Residents of Earth spend time on their hobbies. [v1/p8]
|
|
||||||
- People with /ennui/ (unable to fit into society), divorced after 60 years of
|
|
||||||
matrimony, who are more than 100 years old, can join the military and then be
|
|
||||||
discharged in the colonies. [v1/p11]
|
|
||||||
- Human Standard (a internationalised and mutated form of English) is the Earth
|
|
||||||
lingua franca.
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
*** Education
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
- School is about socialising with peers and figuring out what you wanted to
|
|
||||||
learn. [v1/p13]
|
|
||||||
- Primary School Civics [v1/p16]
|
|
||||||
- /Mandatory sessions/ are a civic duty [v1/p15]
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
Such sessions are for preparing the citizenry in a scarcity situation when the
|
|
||||||
economy has to be switched from eudaimonic to scarcity mode (family Allocs
|
|
||||||
tied to productivity), or even capitalistic. [v1/]
|
|
||||||
- Spaceflight Engineering [v1/]
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
** Places
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
Earth has defense stations orbiting [v1/p7]
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
*** Mitakihara City
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
Mitakihara has a major starport which is particularly important and busy [v1/p7]
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
The city is crammed and most families in tight flats. [v1/p8]
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
School is at the 30th floor [v1/p13]
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
Buildings
|
|
||||||
- Shizuki Consumer Goods [v1/p23]
|
|
||||||
- Hephaestus Nanotechnology [v1/p23]
|
|
||||||
- Chronos Biologics [v1/p23]
|
|
||||||
- Zeus and Prometheus Research Centres (unique to Mitakihara) [v1/p23]
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
The two research centres face each other over a narrow causeway between them.
|
|
||||||
- Headquarter of Cult of Hope (Catholic-style church) [v1/p23]
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
Church has a small bedroom for one
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
*** Space Stations
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
Bucky Model space stations are shaped like football [v1/]
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
*** Epsilon Eridani
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
A human colony; Akemi Homura helped to save it [v1/p30].
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
* Divergence
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
In /To The Stars/, there are some divergences of meanings of words from common usage. These could also reflect on the author's misunderstanding.
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
- [v1/p41] "A scramjet lifted into the air, using an antigrav assist": Scramjets
|
|
||||||
cannot start from standstill or subsonic conditions.
|
|
||||||
- [v2/p63] A nomenclator describes the identity of an individual.
|
|
|
@ -0,0 +1,12 @@
|
||||||
|
#+title: Shizuki Ryouko
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
* Volume I
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
** Chapter 1
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Her wish of being a magical girl was granted after a near-death encounter with
|
||||||
|
demons and miasma (I.1.1285).
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Her weapon as a magical girl is a arbalest (crossbow) and can teleport up to
|
||||||
|
200km, but cannot telekinesis or teleport objects without teleporting self.
|
||||||
|
200km is much greater than the standing record of 63km. (I.2)
|
|
@ -0,0 +1,26 @@
|
||||||
|
#+title: History
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
* Volume I
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
** Chapter 1: A wish
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Allocs were cut (/Recommendation by the Production and Allocation Machine
|
||||||
|
(PAL)/) (I.1.15)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
At some point in the past the "current war" started, which caused extra allocs
|
||||||
|
from voluntary work to increase and the basic allocs to decrease. (I.1.261)
|
||||||
|
Due to a special conscription act enacted 20 years ago, all new magic girls owe
|
||||||
|
the military 30 years of service. The minimum age of combat was dropped to 13
|
||||||
|
(I.1.381). Magic girls enter the military not as privates but 2nd lieutenants
|
||||||
|
(I.1.385).
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
A defect in the Cult of Hope's computers caused random drops with grief cubes
|
||||||
|
for squads on the front line (I.1.653). The occurrence seems random. This was
|
||||||
|
counterintuitive since computers are not supposed to make such mistakes. Secret
|
||||||
|
examination squads sent by Kyouko could not spot problems (I.1.657). Similar
|
||||||
|
defects caused girls to be sent behind the lines or home and never came back.
|
||||||
|
(I.1.665).
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
When Kyouko was visiting Wolf 359, a platoon of infantry dragged Saya-chan's
|
||||||
|
body and soul gem back to safety, but lost her. They broke down in front of
|
||||||
|
Kyouko demanding that she finds the missing Saya-chan (I.1.359).
|
|
@ -0,0 +1,312 @@
|
||||||
|
#+title: To The Stars
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
* Characters
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Shizuki Ryouko 静樹 良子
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Main protagonist
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- Diminutive stature but does not want to be perceived as a child (I.1.27)
|
||||||
|
- Begins as 14 years old (I.1.33)
|
||||||
|
- Thinks "nothing is worth rushing for" (I.1.39)
|
||||||
|
- Lives on the 42nd story, in Mitakihara city (I.1.43)
|
||||||
|
- Has a automatic telescope from grandmother which receives instructions from
|
||||||
|
cortical implants. (I.1.63)
|
||||||
|
- Could not find a hobby (I.1.73)
|
||||||
|
- Wants to be a space traveler (I.1.239)
|
||||||
|
- Wants to be a magic girls despite knowing the risks since the life has
|
||||||
|
contrast with the "sterile, prosaic life" (I.1.399).
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Simona
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Friend of Ryouko and foreign exchange student (I.1.209)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- Wants to be a violinist (I.1.255)
|
||||||
|
- Exchange student but not very interested in learning languages. She embarked
|
||||||
|
on an exchange to get away from family (I.1.835)
|
||||||
|
- Describes Earth as same people everywhere (I.1.871)
|
||||||
|
- May have romantic feelings towards Ryouko (I.1.895) (I.2)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Chiaki 智晶
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Friend of Ryouko (I.1.209)
|
||||||
|
- Long-haired (I.1.209)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Ruiko 瑠衣子
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Friend of Ryouko (I.1.209)
|
||||||
|
- Pig-tailed (I.1.209)
|
||||||
|
- Wanted to learn nanoengineering or theoretical physics (dropped) (I.1.223)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Ryouko's father
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- Over 100 years old but looks around 30 (I.1.79)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Ryouko's mother
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Ryouko's (paternal) grandfather
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- Join the military on Monday next week [relative to reference] (I.1.161)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Ryouko's (paternal) grandmother
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- Joined the military for 12 years (I.1.133)
|
||||||
|
- Stopped writing to her family but she is not dead. (I.1.133)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Tomoe Mami 巴 麻美
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- Looked to be 19-20yo despite being hundreds of years old. (I.1.307)
|
||||||
|
- Can converse while holding a motionless face (I.1.351)
|
||||||
|
- Body is enhanced as for every magical girl (I.1.423)
|
||||||
|
- Field Marshall (I.1.689)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Sakura Kyouko 桜 香子
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- Chooses to remain 14 (I.1.471)
|
||||||
|
- Looks to be 14 and lives in the Catholic-style church in Mitakihara (I.1.429)
|
||||||
|
- Calls Mami "Marshal" (I.1.477)
|
||||||
|
- Calls MSY the "Union" (I.1.589)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Akemi Homura 暁美 ほむら
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- "Left" with no more news (I.1.517)
|
||||||
|
- Believs in "Goddess of Hope" (I.1.539)
|
||||||
|
- 20 years ago she leveraged the Goddess of Hope and her charisma to start a
|
||||||
|
religion (I.1.573). This became the Cult of Hope which was the only living
|
||||||
|
religion which gained members (I.1.577).
|
||||||
|
- Had presentations and statistics when she was spearheading MSY (I.1.611)
|
||||||
|
- Vanished after saving Epsilon Eridani (I.1.581)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Yuma
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Involved in MSY (I.1.613)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- In government (I.1.623)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** some french magical girl
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Does not trust the government (I.1.625)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Kyubey
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- Says Akemi Homura has disappeared due to the exhaustion of her soul gem (I.1.907)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Fleet Admiral Xing
|
||||||
|
Has some feud with General Blackwell [v2/p80]
|
||||||
|
*** General Blackwell
|
||||||
|
Has some feud with Fleet Admiral Xing [v2/p80]
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
* In-Book Items
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
** Books
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** /Universal Guidelines for Middle School Instructors (12th revision)/
|
||||||
|
- Mentioned in (I.1.11)
|
||||||
|
*** /Daughters of the Contract: A Documentary/
|
||||||
|
- Mentioned in [v2/p59]
|
||||||
|
*** /Mahou Shoujo: Their World, Their History (Julian Bradshaw)/
|
||||||
|
- Mentioned in [v2/p60]
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
** Laws/Edicts
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** /Special Conscription Act/ (I.1.381)
|
||||||
|
Due to a special conscription act enacted 20 years ago, all new magic girls owe
|
||||||
|
the military 30 years of service. The minimum age of combat was dropped to 13.
|
||||||
|
Magic girls enter the military not as privates but 2nd lieutenants.
|
||||||
|
*** /Information Restriction Act/ (I.1.391)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Restricts information about Magica from the populace.
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Impossible to enforce.
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
** Tools
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- Chronometer: Some type of clock (I.1.717)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
* Settings
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
** Magica
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- Discouragement from parents is illegal but practiced (I.1.377)
|
||||||
|
- Not bound by travel restrictions (I.1.379)
|
||||||
|
- Many magic girls died in their first combat assignments or before their first
|
||||||
|
leaves or received psychological damage (I.1.395).
|
||||||
|
- Incubator selection is rare and depends on "potential" which is an innate
|
||||||
|
quality irrespective of wishes (I.1.403)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
All chosen by incubators have a deep personal wish worthy of their soul, but
|
||||||
|
this is not a sufficient condition.
|
||||||
|
- Magic girls compose a part of the military and their primary representative is
|
||||||
|
Mami.
|
||||||
|
- Operating alone is a violation of regulations (I.1.955)
|
||||||
|
- Mentorship and team systems between magic girls existed before MSY (I.2)
|
||||||
|
- All magical girls upon enlistment becomes emancipated (I.2)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Mahou Shoujo Youkai (MSY) 魔法少女妖怪
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
An organisation spearheaded by Homura which collects data about battles, grief
|
||||||
|
cube collections, grief cube usage. Members resisted Homura on insisting
|
||||||
|
forcefully. (I.1.611)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
This organisation caused the number of deaths in battle to drop and a grief cube
|
||||||
|
surplus. Kyouko and Mami are still executive heads of MSY but leaves
|
||||||
|
the day-to-day handling to their legates. (I.1.617)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
This organisation was called Union implying that the incubators are the bosses
|
||||||
|
of magica (I.1.591).
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Grief Cube Audit tallies the grief cubes in reserve (I.1.605).
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Cult of Hope
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Uses its infrastructure to handle all data collection for grief cube logistics
|
||||||
|
(I.1.633).
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
** Demons and Miasmae
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
A miasma is a patch of localised thing which can be cleaned up (I.1.931). Signals
|
||||||
|
have a hard time moving through miasma (I.1.991). It also interferes with biology
|
||||||
|
enhancement systems (I.1.1049). It also blocks visible light (I.1.993).
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Demons seem to co-exist with miasmae.
|
||||||
|
- "A white-robed figure loomed over them, tall as three men" (I.1.983)
|
||||||
|
- Demons can release intense beams of light to destroy things (I.1.1045)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Miasmae and demons occur in industrial districts where populations are sparse
|
||||||
|
(I.1.1113). Being able to see demons outside of miasma is the smoking gun of a
|
||||||
|
magical girl (I.1.1213).
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
** Timeframe
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- The incubator system still exists. Instructors cannot divulge information
|
||||||
|
about incubator system until the pupils are at age 20. (I.1.9)
|
||||||
|
- At Ryuoko's grandmother's time an automatic telescope and cortical implants
|
||||||
|
were possible (I.1.63)
|
||||||
|
- Clothes are self-cleaning (I.1.29) and robots can do the dressing (I.1.29), both
|
||||||
|
require money. Bedsheets are self folding (I.1.85)
|
||||||
|
- Sleep-suppressing regimen cause people to sleep 0-3h a day for adults.
|
||||||
|
Considered unsafe for 14-year-olds (I.1.33).
|
||||||
|
- People can talk without moving lips (I.1.35)
|
||||||
|
- Hair can maintain at constant length (I.1.43)
|
||||||
|
- Species diversity preserve (*SDP*) (I.1.51) presumably some sort of park
|
||||||
|
- Space station can deflect major asteroids or wipe out continents (I.1.65) and
|
||||||
|
constantly being upgraded, added to, or replaced. (I.1.65) Maybe redundant
|
||||||
|
(I.1.67).
|
||||||
|
- Knowledge is directly injected into consciousness (I.1.23), but has
|
||||||
|
speed limits (I.1.213).
|
||||||
|
- Can live eternally (I.1.141).
|
||||||
|
- Food synthesizer produces food (I.1.167)
|
||||||
|
- Images can be called up from optical implants which highlights interest
|
||||||
|
regions and can take pictures (I.1.287).
|
||||||
|
- Aliens (I.1.529)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Emergency Packages
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
The packages operate by assisting with motion and thought. The civilian-issue
|
||||||
|
version is weaker than the military version. Emergency mode turns on when there
|
||||||
|
is a life-or-death situation (I.1.1063).
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Exiting emergency mode causes /recoil/ which is traumatic. Some soldiers turn
|
||||||
|
emergency mode on for weeks at a time and exiting is very difficult (I.1.1133).
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
** Economics
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
The economy operates on a /eudaemonic/ model rather than capitalistic. (I.1.261)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- Resources are allocated in units of /Alloc/ which were cut by
|
||||||
|
/Recommendations by the PAL/ (I.1.13)
|
||||||
|
- All productive works are voluntary. (I.1.69)
|
||||||
|
- No one wants to live outside a city because it is expensive and boring
|
||||||
|
(I.1.89). Flats are government-allocated and citizens spend
|
||||||
|
government-distributed incomes (I.1.89).
|
||||||
|
- Goods are more expensive away from centres of production, which are in cities
|
||||||
|
(I.1.89)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Travel
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- Solution to congestion was to go 3D via traffic tubes (I.1.189) (Just
|
||||||
|
one more lane bro!!!)
|
||||||
|
- People can use personal auto-transports (I.1.185) which can be self-driven or
|
||||||
|
magnetically driven (I.1.187).
|
||||||
|
- Public transport tunnels are guarded by sentries to protect falling but they
|
||||||
|
ignore magic girls (I.1.449). Public transport channels are under surveillance
|
||||||
|
(I.1.89).
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Space flight is still a scarcity. Pleasure flights were priced to absurd levels
|
||||||
|
to restrict civilians. It had not always been like this but changed for
|
||||||
|
colonists and military (I.1.59).
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
Military veterans can have unlimited travel on earth or colonies and the right
|
||||||
|
to settle anywhere (I.1.383).
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
** Culture
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- Governance stress having each generation of children experience a little of
|
||||||
|
human conditions (I.1.33)
|
||||||
|
- Governance placed restrictions on direct mental communication and VR (I.1.35)
|
||||||
|
- Nothing worth rushing for for the general population (I.1.39).
|
||||||
|
- Story of human history was all about escape in the past and has reached the
|
||||||
|
end for perfect society (I.1.45).
|
||||||
|
- Residents of Earth spend time on their hobbies (I.1.69).
|
||||||
|
- People with /ennui/ (unable to fit into society), divorced after 60 years of
|
||||||
|
matrimony, who are more than 100 years old, can join the military and then be
|
||||||
|
discharged in the colonies. (I.1.141)
|
||||||
|
- Human Standard (a internationalised and mutated form of English) is the Earth
|
||||||
|
lingua franca (I.1.221).
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
*** Education
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
- School is about socialising with peers and figuring out what you wanted to
|
||||||
|
learn (I.1.197).
|
||||||
|
- Primary School Civics (I.1.273).
|
||||||
|
- /Mandatory sessions/ are a civic duty (I.1.255).
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- Shizuki Consumer Goods (I.1.417)
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- Hephaestus Nanotechnology (I.1.417)
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- Chronos Biologics (I.1.417)
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- Headquarter of Cult of Hope (Catholic-style church) (I.1.429).
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Church has a small bedroom for one (I.1.467).
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*** Epsilon Eridani
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A human colony; Akemi Homura helped to save it (I.1.581).
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*** Wolf 359
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A human colony (I.1.675).
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* Divergence
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- (I.1.853) "A scramjet lifted into the air, using an antigrav assist":
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Scramjets cannot start from standstill or subsonic conditions.
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- [v2/p63] A nomenclator describes the identity of an individual.
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@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
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\documentclass[12pt,article]{article}
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\documentclass[12pt,dvipsnames,article]{article}
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\usepackage{magica}
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\usepackage{magica}
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@ -17,14 +17,15 @@ extensions.
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\begin{figure}
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\begin{figure}
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\centering
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\centering
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\begin{tikzpicture}
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\begin{tikzpicture}
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\Magica(0,0) {Tomoe M.};
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\Magica[TomoeM](0,0){Tomoe M.}
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\Magica(4,0) {Sakura Y.};
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\Magica[SakuraY](4,0){Sakura Y.}
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\Civilian(8,0){Simona}
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\MilLand[faction=hostile,
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\MilLand[faction=hostile,
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main=demon,
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main=demon,
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altitude={low}{},
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altitude={low}{},
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echelon=battalion] (8,0) {Battalion of demons flying at low altitude};
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echelon=battalion] (0,-2) {Battalion of demons flying at low altitude};
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\end{tikzpicture}
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\end{tikzpicture}
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\caption{Symbols for Tomoe Mami and Sakura Kyouko}
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\caption{Symbols for some magical girls, civilian, and demons}
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\end{figure}
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\end{figure}
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\end{document}
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\end{document}
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@ -0,0 +1,45 @@
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\documentclass[dvipsnames,final]{beamer}
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\usepackage{magica-common}
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\title{To The Stars Battle Diagrams \\ I.1 A Wish}
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\author{Leni Aniva}
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\date{04 July 2023}
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\begin{document}
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\frame{\titlepage}
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\begin{frame}
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\frametitle{I.1.931 - 1109}
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\begin{tikzpicture}[
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Turbine/.style={draw=black,star,star points=3,star point height=10pt,scale=1.5,fill=white},
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Solar/.style={Blue!80,draw=black},
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]
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\filldraw[black!20] (-5,-1) rectangle (5,1);
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\node[Turbine] (turbine1) at (1,1.5) {};
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||||||
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\draw (turbine1) circle (23pt);
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||||||
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\node[Turbine] (turbine2) at (-1,1.5) {};
|
||||||
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\draw (turbine2) circle (23pt);
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||||||
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\node[Turbine] (turbine3) at (-3,1.5) {};
|
||||||
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\draw (turbine3) circle (23pt);
|
||||||
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||||||
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\filldraw[Solar] (2,1.1) rectangle (4,1.9);
|
||||||
|
\draw[black] (2,1.1) grid (4,1.9);
|
||||||
|
\Magica[ShizukiR](1,0){Shizuki R.}
|
||||||
|
\Civilian(0,1){Simona}
|
||||||
|
\Demon(2,1)
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
\MilLand[faction=hostile,
|
||||||
|
main=demon,
|
||||||
|
echelon=squad] (0,-3)
|
||||||
|
\MilActivity[faction=hostile,main=explosion] (2,-1)
|
||||||
|
\MilAir[faction=hostile,
|
||||||
|
main=demon,
|
||||||
|
altitude={low}{},
|
||||||
|
echelon=squad,speed leader={110}{1}] (3,-3)
|
||||||
|
\end{tikzpicture}
|
||||||
|
\end{frame}
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
\end{document}
|
|
@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
\usepackage{magica-common}
|
\usepackage{magica-common}
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
\title{To The Stars Battle Diagrams \\ Vol 2. Fantasma}
|
\title{To The Stars Battle Diagrams \\ I.2 Fantasma}
|
||||||
\author{Leni Aniva}
|
\author{Leni Aniva}
|
||||||
\date{04 July 2023}
|
\date{04 July 2023}
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
|
@ -11,6 +11,8 @@
|
||||||
\frame{\titlepage}
|
\frame{\titlepage}
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
\begin{frame}
|
\begin{frame}
|
||||||
|
\frametitle{Some Battle}
|
||||||
|
|
||||||
\begin{tikzpicture}
|
\begin{tikzpicture}
|
||||||
\MilLand[faction=hostile, echelon=team, main=infantry, scale=2](0,0)
|
\MilLand[faction=hostile, echelon=team, main=infantry, scale=2](0,0)
|
||||||
\end{tikzpicture}
|
\end{tikzpicture}
|
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